Poems

[Mich]

Originally Posted by kuota

mich i sort of got the picture on your poem but i could be wrong : i use translator hehe i wish i could write poems T_T

haha cheater jk. well if you want to i can try to translate it in eng, but it wouldnt sound good cause if i translate it, it doesnt ryhme..
of course you can write poems, just use you imagination and your fantasy .

[Kohta]

Originally Posted by Mich

haha cheater jk. well if you want to i can try to translate it in eng, but it wouldnt sound good cause if i translate it, it doesnt ryhme..
of course you can write poems, just use you imagination and your fantasy .

ok ill try.... thanx for your inspiration mich!!!

[Mich]

Originally Posted by kuota

ok ill try.... thanx for your inspiration mich!!!

mhm no problems

[GhostHeLL]

My Mini Poems in order of creation
<1>"Death is an Awesome feeling that One must go thru at least Twice in a Life Time"

<2> "Life is like a Mine ready to explode when you least expect it too"

<3> "Life is like a passing Spring...A Cool Breeze that flows over you...never stopping till the time comes asunder"

<4 Hail> "Let the Snow be your model...Let the brush flow with your mind...For the beauty that shines in the eye takes your breath away"

<5 solitude> "I gave u my word...u spat it back at me...I gave u my arm...u sliced it off from me...I gave u my pity...u turned it down...I gave u my soul...U sold it to the Devil...Now I give u my forgiveness...& yet u chose to seal ur self to eternal Damnation"
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These can't really be called poems, but what the heck I felt like posting them

[RiSei]

Angel, angel can you hear me
Won’t you try to answer me
Has my signal grown weaker than moonlight
Does this transmission convey my grief

We are lost in wars and silence
Dark November over all our lives
People pass by without speaking
Cold despair in their eyes

So many have taken refuge
In religion and in lies
Just empty words in tired living
Without the hope that you provide

Angel, angel are you in heaven, or in prison
Dying to be free….
Alone and cold, barely breathing
Too weak to press the transmit key


(adapted from life during wartime)

[TheWolf]

Originally Posted by Mich

haha cheater jk. well if you want to i can try to translate it in eng, but it wouldnt sound good cause if i translate it, it doesnt ryhme..
of course you can write poems, just use you imagination and your fantasy .

don't know if you're still here Mich, but i'd be interested in seeing that translated - even if it doesn't rhyme. it would be prose then, but i've read some really good prose.

a song i wrote my wife:

As Long As We Are We

When I first met you many years ago
I told you I would marry you this I Know
You let me stay round - you didn't make me leave
And thru the years you have finally come to see

As long as I'm with you - As long as you're with me
I don't care what we do - As long as we are we
As long as I'm with you - As long as you're with me
I don't care what we do - As long as we are we

We've both had times when we thot only of ourselves
But as we've grown we put that noise up on the shelf
We're cleaving together we are becoming one
and when I cleave with you, cleaving has been so much fun

As long as I'm with you - As long as you're with me
I don't care what we do - As long as we are we
As long as I'm with you - As long as you're with me
I don't care what we do - As long as we are we

As long as we are we
As long as we are we

[mjsh83]

very nice.... maybe when i get married and live with my wife for many years, i will feel the same

[Kari_ufo]

Originally Posted by Mich

hm.. cat, hat....?
btw i have a lot of poems, but theyre in swedish , so i dont think you guys would understand what im writing about .

Please post them or at least send them to me, it got me interested, since im Swedish.

i will try to come with something to write as well but not now.

[TheWolf]

Originally Posted by GhostHeLL

<5 solitude> "I gave u my word...u spat it back at me...I gave u my arm...u sliced it off from me...I gave u my pity...u turned it down...I gave u my soul...U sold it to the Devil...Now I give u my forgiveness...& yet u chose to seal ur self to eternal Damnation"

i really like this one Ghost!

Originally Posted by GhostHeLL

These can't really be called poems, but what the heck I felt like posting them

these are called "prose" a type of poem that doesn't rhyme.

1 a: the ordinary language people use in speaking or writing b: a literary medium distinguished from poetry especially by its greater irregularity and variety of rhythm and its closer correspondence to the patterns of everyday speech2: a prosaic style, quality, or condition

they're pretty good too, btw!