Scarless

It's bad english but you can read it..


In the time 1786 in Japan

Hello, I’m the narrator of this little story.
Let me introduce myself. My name is rekaf it’s an strange name for an Japanese I know but u will know after the story…
Ok let me begin the story.

*Flashes*
In the time 1786 in Japan
Once upon a time there were 3 kids they were lost in a forest.
1 of the 3 kids had a big scar on his face and on his back there was a kid. Looks like hes the youngest of the 3 he can’t even walk yet and the 3de is a kinda a fat guy with a big bag with him, and in the bag there was an knife, water and tons of food and …
Narrator: they played hide-and-seek and losted the track to go out the forest.
The fat guy was tired of the walking and suggested to rest a bit by the big tree ahead there next to a road. The kid with the big scar had no problem with it so they listened to rest for a couple of minutes. The fat kid runned as first to the tree. When he was by the tree he threw the bag right next to him and fell in sleep, the kid with the scar tooked a place to next to the fat kid and the little 1 behind on his back was already in sleep but… the kid drooled over the cloths of the guy. First he was looking with a dirty face to the kid.
*that’s why I felt something on my neck… and I though it was raining*
He setted the kid carefully next to him, and tooked a blanket out the bag of the fat guy to cover the little drooler guy. But eww… the fat kid had a very bad breath and snores like an pig… suddenly the guy with a scar had an idea, he tooked the bag and was trying to find something… over a couple he found it… but the weird thing is… it is an APPLE
He tooked out the bag and trew in the mouth of the fat guy… he keeps sleeping likes there have happens, now he even looks more like an roasted piggy… The scar kid has finally found his rest and lend back to the tree. Its was so peaceful by the tree birds were singing and the sound of an waterfall. He stared to the sky for few minutes and fell in sleep…




When they woke up it was already night the bird stopped singing too but when he was looking in the way of the fat kids bag he saw a mature guy snuffling in the bag of them. The guy with the scar was trying to move but he couldn’t cause he and his friends were tied up. Looks like his friends are still in dreamland. The scar kid tried to wake the fat guy because he’s the strongest one of the tree. He tried to kick him and smack him with his own head but it didn’t worked now the scar kid got a thing on his head of the size from the MT. Everest.
Suddenly…
There came a sort of wild boar out of the bushes, the fat mature saw it and tried to run away but… he couldn’t cause he was to fat. The wild boar used his teeth’s and bited in the ass of the fat guy and hell he screamed like an sissy. The guy was the scar face couldn’t hold his laugh. The fat guy ran away screaming and torn pants. When the guy was gone the wild boar walked slowly to the scar kid… his friends were still sleeping like an pig… the wild boar is now in front of the scar face guy. The scar face guy is now kinda scared. The wild boar was snuffling the guy.
But suddenly…
There came a voice out the bushes where the wild boar came from
“Is it another wild boar�? Was the scar kid thinking
Nope, it was the owner of the wild boar. The wild boar looked with big eyes of joy to him
He licked the scar guy and ran to the old guy.
“Eww… wild boar slime� he looked with an awful face.
“ Where have u been my little darling� said the owner.
The owner was an old guy with a beard that was so white like the snow and had many scars on his arms.
“Sarah go help those tied kids� said the old man.
And the boar ran to the kids and used her teeth’s to cut the rope.
“She sure has sharp teeth’s� said the kid with the scar.
“What do you think? I sharp her teeth’s everyday with my sword� said the old guy.
“eh? Is that guy crazy?� Was the kid thinking.
Finally the boar has cut the rope.
She ran back to her master and received a boar cookie.
“Good girl� said the old guy with an happy smile.
The scar kid thanked the old guy for saving them.
“Thank you mister how ever could I help u with? Said the scar kid.
“Uhm… don’t u need to wake your friends?�
“Yes, but I can’t wake them.� Looked with a ‘’ face.
“Whatever I do they just don’t wake up.
“O? let me have a try� he had that big smile again when he said that.
He took a cookie out his bag and set it in front of the fat guy nose.
The fat guy opened his eyes and ate the cookie in 1 single bite.
“Ooo… that was a chocolate cookie, o well back to sleep� said the fatty
but he didn’t saw that the guy was still next him.
When he opened his eyes he saw a old guy with a giant smile next to him and hell he screamed hard.
“Whooo.. who the hell are you? U want to steal our stuff? Then u need a fight with me first� said the fatty with his settled knuckles.
The scar kid came next to him and gave him a punch on his head.
“Man… didn’t u heard something when u were asleep?�
“what? Did something happen? Did that guy took our stuff?� He looked angry at him the fat guy.
He received another fist on his head from the scar kid.
“dummy don’t decide it if u don’t know it�
“what happened then?� said the fatty with a painful face
“Well… that guy saved us.�
“What? He? LoL I can easly defeat that guy�. Fatty looked at the direction of the old guy that still has that big smile on his face.
“If u still say that u will receiver another punch on your head and this time its twice hard with those 2 I gave u already.� The scar face kid looked with an evil face to fatty.
The fatty ran to the old guy and said:
“oo.. u did saved us� said it with an very scared face
“you kids sure are friendly to each other.� the old guy couldn’t hold his laugh...


Made by Mashir(a.k.a Nightsoldier) and Kin-men

Comments

[rjd22]

you have to improve your englisch grammar

there are still to many mistakes in your story

but still a nice story